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Many fanfic writers use the services of the same beta reader for years. I have been wondering if it would be better to switch betas more often and be exposed to a wider variety of comments.

What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of switching? Of staying with the same beta always? I ask this theoretically, because this is a question about the system of long beta relations, not about individual people. If you want, you can answer from a writer´s perspective, but also from a beta-reader's perspective, or both.


I answered from a writer's perspective. And, by the way, this was a very good topic to pursue.
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In general terms, long-term beta relationships bring comfort, security. It's much easier for me to pose some crazy way out there what if when it's just [livejournal.com profile] newnumbertwo and [livejournal.com profile] laura_mayfair who are going to see it at first. I'm not afraid to pose weird ideas to either of them, or to ask them if they think I can write something - not CAN I, but do I have the skill to do justice to the story I want. I know no matter how crazy the idea, [livejournal.com profile] newnumbertwo and [livejournal.com profile] laura_mayfair are going to be supportive of whatever effort I put into it, won't belittle me, even if they don't like the story idea, and will tell me honestly if they don't much like the direction of the story.

On the other hand, sometimes I want to write a fic FOR [livejournal.com profile] newnumbertwo or [livejournal.com profile] laura_mayfair, and obviously, I don't want them to have to beta their own fic, so I have to reach out beyond my comfort zone and ask someone new.

And when it comes to editing/revising, second, third, and more drafts, [livejournal.com profile] newnumbertwo and [livejournal.com profile] laura_mayfair are both very busy these days, and while it means leaving my cozy writing room with the beanbag chairs and the bowls of chocolate snacks and endless slushy iced tea, branching out brings me to people with different perspectives who refine my fic (and my writing in general) in different ways.

I would like to always have [livejournal.com profile] newnumbertwo and [livejournal.com profile] laura_mayfair as my sounding boards and cheerleaders. And since I will not, because things always change, whether we like it or not, I will also adapt and welcome other people into the fold.

Speaking only in terms of my most recent experience with Some Assembly Required, which I completed a portion of for both [livejournal.com profile] getyourwordsout Big Bang and [livejournal.com profile] het_bigbang (which reveals on AO3 on Monday): I had a total of eleven women giving me individual feedback. Each of those eleven brought something different to the piece, asking me different questions, posing different what ifs, and each one, in her own way, made the piece better.

[livejournal.com profile] newnumbertwo and [livejournal.com profile] laura_mayfair were the first two, in its initial stages, when it was pouring out of me thousands of words at a time, and they were like "What is this?" and "I like this. Where are you going with it?" and "I don't think anybody's ever done this. This is fantastic!".

[livejournal.com profile] newnumbertwo reads and leaves me comments on technique - like action beats - and squees at particularly appealing ideas or scenes or clarifies characterization, particularly with respect to Laura Roslin. She was my first fandom beta after I started writing, and I cannot even tell you how much work she did when I first invited her into my crazy OCD world of fics and prompts and ideas, etc. I was astounded - and grateful - when she didn't run away screaming.

[livejournal.com profile] laura_mayfair points out things she especially likes, and gives super-supportive comments when a scene or fic pulls together especially well. She tells me when I've hit characterization really well, when she finds something funny or interesting, or when something in the fic gives her a fic idea/question which I might be able to use in the fic (or somewhere else). She's also great at telling me when I've used a particularly good turn of phrase.

[livejournal.com profile] singerdiva01_sk brings a uniquely feminist perspective to her critiques, and she knows how to bring on the GIRLY! (And thank gods, because I am not girly at all, and there will be two weddings.) :D Like, red shoes with a red dress? NO, Lana.

[livejournal.com profile] altitudeandwine gives a brusque, no-nonsense 'this doesn't work because' critique which is hardcore without being harsh. She worked on Assembly last minute and really tightened it up. I didn't take all her advice, but the advice I did take improved Assembly measurably.

[livejournal.com profile] fragrantwoods sees connections and story-behind-the-story, even when I don't realize I'm writing it, and she's great at feedback on social work perspectives and relationship negotiation, among other things.

[livejournal.com profile] kdbleu is also a K/L fan, was one of my first 'cold readers,' and gave me great feedback with regard to the balance of Kara and Lee's relationship to the rest of the story. I didn't take all of her advice, either, but again, what I used improved the fic.

With Assembly, I had to rely on non-BSG betas, too, since I was finishing it for BigBangs, and each of them was an educational and positive beta experience.

[livejournal.com profile] red_b_rackham (for [livejournal.com profile] het_bigbang) slogged her way through four different longfics and made me make smaller paragraphs, among other things, lol, asked clarifying questions about dialogue attribution and such, and squeed over parts she really liked. She is my favorite non-BSG-fandom beta (am I supposed to have a favorite?), that's how much I liked working with her.

[livejournal.com profile] aflaminghalo (for GYWO BigBang), who is not at all familiar with BSG, gamely read a new fandom, read more than the required 10-15K words, and loved the story, especially the way Kara created a family around herself, and gave me several suggestions for ways to enhance other POVs than Kara's.

[livejournal.com profile] nyyki gave me lots of last-minute verbal brainstorming (and an idea for another fic).

There are a couple of people who wish to remain anonymous for reasons.

And the [livejournal.com profile] getyourwordsout mods, who okayed me having a reader even though I'd gone waaaay over the target word count (I put a stopping place in there. [livejournal.com profile] aflaminghalo decided not to stop.).

The ladies at [livejournal.com profile] bsg_checkin are amazingly supportive in general, and willing to cheerlead or read a bit of a fic or answer questions about a topic. The writers and mods at [livejournal.com profile] getyourwordsout are stupendous cheerleaders, and quite talented at keeping people motivated over the long haul.



I'm not gonna go wild (Um, FRAK no) and say sayonara to [livejournal.com profile] newnumbertwo and [livejournal.com profile] laura_mayfair anytime soon (or like, ever), but I'm easier now with the changes happening within BSG fandom in general and within my BSG writing world in particular. If and when (please make it no time soon, pleasepleaseplease) I have to let them go, I will let them go with love.

Things change. I don't have to like it. I do have to Roll With the Changes. TM REO Speedwagon.

Date: 2015-08-28 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] newnumbertwo.livejournal.com
*huggles* I'll be happy to beta for you as long as you continue writing. :D

And I'm loving where Assembly is taking you/us. ♥

Date: 2015-08-28 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] newnumbertwo.livejournal.com
Yeah, I like the two parts. Cool.

And you know I love middle-of-the-night inspiration.

Date: 2015-08-30 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laura-mayfair.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you've been able to get additional pairs of eyes on your work; I'be been terribly absent of late.

I love this whole post, celebrating all of the different perspectives people bring to the beta process.

And I DO hope you continue writing for a very long time to come!

/hugs

Date: 2015-09-01 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] red-b-rackham.livejournal.com
I love everything about this post. :D It really is so interesting to work with different betas - from the ones you always work with, to new ones, people in or not in the fandom they're betaing for - because certain people pick up on certain things or are better at technical, better at big picture, etc.

I am blushing over the "fav" comment. :D I defs look forward to working with you again too! You're awesome!! (Though maybe I should brush up on my BSG, hey? ;P)

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