Anybody got a few minutes?

I've got about 2500 words on a 2015 bsg_kink bingo card fill. I changed something major and need someone to read through and make sure I changed all the pronouns properly, AND let me know if anything else is confusing. Also if it's worth continuing. You know, the usual. :D

I think plaid_slytherin, singerdiva01_sk, fragrantwoods, and laura_mayfair have access to it already. It's on page eight of "KINK - current week," which is obviously a badly-named document. lol

Anybody else has time, ask me to add you.